Closed Eyes


Eyes wide shut yet I see –

landscape of your physique,

luscious crevices of thy lips;

heightened senses, still perceives –

lingering tender lit’le kisses,

stirring scent surrounding thee,

racing heartbeat, muffled screams;

such sweet mem’ry envelops me –

our lost love,


haunting still.



6 thoughts on “Closed Eyes

      1. Haha. I’ve read that it is difficult for Romance writers to write love scenes. It’s an acquired skill making it sexy and sensual not cheesy, and romance writers can be any age.

        I think you did a great job. I struggle with doing that to but I’m getting better. I would say just think of what you like and what kind of things you find are sensual. It’s probably a good start ๐Ÿ™‚

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